Aliens Revive Human from Arctic Chamber and Instantly Regret It
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Published 2024-04-15
Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated!
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All Comments (4)
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good concept, but you need some serious proofreading, there are lots of logic mistakes, one minute it is telling about someone being captured, then he is on the heroes shoulder even though he is captured somewhere else being tortured. The story is good, but you really need to make a flow chart showing who is where doing what when, then it would be great.
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Yeah what Sgtbones said keep working on it polished up it will be a right gem 💎
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